Sleeping Ash

[chrisnesss]

This is a photo of my buddy Ash.

[LeeIs]

A bit grainy but looks vintage. It could use a little bit off the bottom i think . I know the whole point is that he's sleeping, but i wish we could see the eyes, or maybe a different angle to include the coach he's sleeping on and more of his body. he blends in too much with the coach.

[chrisnesss]

Yeah you are right. The lighting in my house is horrible. This was the angle where I could catch highlights on his face to pop a bit. And the grain was intentional.

Thanks again for the input.

[Frog]

My well known pet peeve.......his whiskers are running off frame.
I think you may have been able to catch those highlights by getting lower. Wasn't there so can't tell for sure...just appears that way from pic.

[chrisnesss]

I could have gotten a little lower on this shot, but my daughter was to the right of him sleeping. Didn't want to wake her up. But lesson learned.

Thanks again.

[Shebang]

This would make a good "oops I forgot" greeting card. Even though I like it as it is, with the suggested pointers it would have been really good.

[chrisnesss]

Thanks Paula.

[SmartWombat]

And since both of them were asleep, the two of them together might have made a good photo too.

[gahspidy]

I like the grainy vintage look of the image. i agree with others comments about getting down lower a bit. i think this would have worked best in a horizontal frame also. then the whiskers could be in frame too
Still, a nice mood about it.