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  1. 09-22-2009, 09:34 AM #1
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    At the air show...

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  2. 09-22-2009, 10:11 AM #2
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    Re: At the air show...

    And another 'version'...


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    Re: At the air show...

    light source issue, maybe some dodging on the planes or a different secondary image would help.

    edit/ sloppy on the smoke especially, but the idea is there. really good idea with the second version
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    Re: At the air show...

    Very cool shot on it's own - even better with a high quality edit to version 2. Very creative!
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    Re: At the air show...

    caleb and jetrim - Thanks for your inputs. I have taken some time to do a better job and reposted. Appreciate your time and encouragement. - TF
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