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  1. 09-14-2009, 03:32 PM #1
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    Mockingbird singing

    This little guy was just singing his heart out this afternoon, didn't seem a bit bothered by the camera. This shot is my favorite pose of the set, but I'm wondering if the background is just TOO busy?
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    Re: Mockingbird singing

    Very good. I like the position of the bird. Maybe crop just a touch off of the top. Nice work.
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    Re: Mockingbird singing

    Thr BG looks very strange to me. What is the streaking? - TF
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    Re: Mockingbird singing

    Terry,
    Palm frons. This was about 1000' from the beach and the walkway is lined with coconut palms. The bird was standing on a sea grape bush.

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    Thanks, was thinking maybe I should crop down to remove that brown branch at the top right.
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