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Thread: Out the door

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    Out the door

    HC B/W @100% crop.Let it rip...

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    Re: Out the door

    I like it mabe a little dark for my taste. Running from or to ?? I also like it with both his feet off the ground
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    Re: Out the door

    A person walking on air, I like it
    Maybe a shade too dark, but I think it works.
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    Re: Out the door

    I like the fact that you got him in mid air so to speak but overall Rick I feel the image is lacking in information perhaps; why is he running and a sight of his destination would help, basically some context. But you caught him well as I imagine you had very little time to compose.
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    Re: Out the door

    I really, really like photographs like this. It makes you ask questions such as "whats going on here, then?"

    Nice shot

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    Re: Out the door

    I love it - my imagination is running wild, is he doing a runner, chasing after someone who didn't pay for his food, just late for a meeting with friends, just mugged someone, baby is about to be born ...

    I think its wonderful and the detail is spot on.

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    Re: Out the door

    I like everything except how dark it is. Really makes his clothes blend in a bit too much.
    Might want to do something with that thing on the left by filling that light in at the bottom and maybe getting rid of that thin white streak above his elbow.
    Nice composition and catching those feet and his shadow is great.
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    Re: Out the door

    Thanks everyone."running man" yes, timing was cool.Will keep my eyes open for more. :O) Would I love a fast 70-200mm for this type stuff. I have learned so much from the feedback received.Thanks again!

    Rodger :thumbsup: I hear ya...Imagine away..I do.

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