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    At the fair.

    I tried a few shots at the fair a couple of weeks ago. Here is one that I thought looked pretty neat. What do you think??
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails At the fair.-2009_07_10_999_86.jpg  
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    Re: At the fair.

    Nice colours and I like the angle on this shot, my only critique is I wish there was a bit more space on the left with all the wheel in view.

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    Re: At the fair.

    the right you mean???? I see that. Unfortunately the image was not cropped. That is how it was shot. And actually all of the photos taken of that ride were shot similarly. I think the problem was that I wanted a tight crop, but the ride was moving at the time the photo was taken.
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    Re: At the fair.

    I like it. I could 'feel' the height - if that makes sense!
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    Re: At the fair.

    I like it, though I find that really bright light dead center a little distracting.

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    Re: At the fair.

    Quote Originally Posted by tayl0124
    the right you mean???? I see that. Unfortunately the image was not cropped. That is how it was shot. And actually all of the photos taken of that ride were shot similarly. I think the problem was that I wanted a tight crop, but the ride was moving at the time the photo was taken.
    Yep the left

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    Re: At the fair.

    Quote Originally Posted by readingr
    Yep the left

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    Right side of photo - left side of ride

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