Brighton Kite Festival

[kate90]

So it was a fab day, brilliant weather for it!
Let me know what you think, thanks guys =)

[kate90]

any comments/critique would be appreciated...

[tayl0124]

okay here is my take on these pics. Take it as you wish.

#1: Great expression on the kids face however the lighting conditions are a distraction.

#2: Face is too centered for my liking, also almost no expression on the face causes a lack of interest for me.

#3: Probably the best of the bunch for me. I would have liked to maybe see what the kids were holding (although I am sure I know what it is.). They have blank faces but you can tell it is from extreme concentration.

#4: This one looks okay to me. It is just two kites to me. It also looks like there is a little smudge on the right side just below the half way point. You may have cloned something out there (or maybe should).

#5: I don't really know what to look at here.


Sorry for what seems like to be all negatives, but I seem to think that is what helps me the most to learn (people not holding back their thoughts).