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    jamaica

    Both shots taken in jamaica

    i must say...i love both of these pictures so very much...but, i need some honest feedback. does anyone else love them too?

    if not....what would you do to change/fix/alter the image?

    thanks guys!!
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    Re: jamaica

    I really like the second one. The lighting is really interesting and I love the composition
    I am not a huge fan of the first, the blue and greens seem a bit too saturated and the rocks a pretty overexposed.

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    Re: jamaica

    The first find the good shot. The fire on the branch leads to a blurring of the background and makes the subject main branch, if you liked this OK, I would have preferred to focus on the rocks and the sea and let the fuzzy branch, setting it maybe not. The colors seem good, to the limit with a small level to make best blue of the sea. The white rock is inside the limits (254)
    The second is much more difficult.
    The shot is OK, but the lighting conditions you are penalized. In order to expose the parties a good shadow, was significantly degrade the illuminated part. The foam is burned I do not know what time you have used, but I assume many (given the apparent movement of water). This led to a slight lack of sharpness in
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