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    The bane of my spring

    Nothing like allergies as the trees pollinate. Bah, humbug *achoo*

    I played around with some of the creative develop settings in lightroom. I'm not sure if the composition works on this though. It doesn't seem to look quite right no matter how I rotate it.
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    Re: The bane of my spring

    I like the way you present this on an angle and your half-silhouette. There is a very slight blurring on the lower right due to depth of field. If that could be fixed it would be perfect.

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    Re: The bane of my spring

    Tried reshooting today with more dof, but the sky on the original was thick cloud cover, and today, bright blue with puffy clouds. Couldn't get the same effect.

    Also I miss the little ant on the top of the branch
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    Re: The bane of my spring

    I lean towards the second post's composition. I think it could still use a little more space on the top and bottom though. I like the pink background, very original.

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