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Thread: Fields 2

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    Exclamation Fields 2

    Shooting some fields near Beit-Shemesh. I just drove out with my sister's boyfriend, and when I saw something I wanted to photographed I asked him to stop.

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    Re: Fields 2

    The oversaturation makes these nice pictures a little surreal but it does not improve them. For some added interest, the fields need an occupant, be it an animal in the field or a human animal on the track or vica versa for that matter. Maybe even the car you were travelling in might sit nicely in the shot above.
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    Re: Fields 2

    Way too much contrast.

    It looks like an attractive area but there is nothing in the foreground to draw the viewer into the image.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Fields 2

    Israel is such a beautiful land. I think the contrast works well with the photo. I like the grass and sky, but the wandering path draws my attention. Nice shot

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    Re: Fields 2

    i like the heavy saturation on this... looks like a painting..... but who am i?
    It looks peaceful and somewhere i'd like to take a walk... i don't think an animal or anything else is needed.... just peaceful as is....
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    Re: Fields 2

    I like the effect of the over saturation though the actual scene lack substance. Maybe if you moved forward more for this using the trail as a frame for the right side?. Anyway I like what you are trying to do. S
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