Model T

[GB1]

She's Talia, actually. From a Jan shoot. C&Cs welcome. Maybe a crop would be interesting also?
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[chaman]

:crazy: :blush2: :ihih:

Seriously man...stop this. LOL!

[shootme]

Nice, I don't like the window obove the head though, the stone work as background would have worked well alone. Possibly some foreground light to the body/face with a reflector? S

[GB1]

Thanks guys, I think we did use a reflector throughout the shoot but this one doesn't really seem to have that, so I guess we didn't on this one. No window Shootme? I sort of like it, but I can see where it's 'different' enough from the rest of the background to actually distract.

Chaman, I told her she had some 'secret admirers' on this site :lol: I would like to shoot her in the studio, but she's pretty busy with work and college so don't know if you'll see her again or not.

-G

[draymorton]

GB - I should have known that Talia had something to do with this (not that I'm complaining!).

I hesitate to recommend any changes without being able to see what they'd look like before I recommend them. But I think I'd at least try some eye lightening and some vignette work (which might help put the focus on her a little more).

Compositionally, I'm not exactly sure what would be better than the original. Hmmm...

[jetrim]

You did do a very nice job of holding the detail in the black GB athough like draymorton, I don't know that I could offer much help regarding any improvements.

[chaman]

Thanks guys, I think we did use a reflector throughout the shoot but this one doesn't really seem to have that, so I guess we didn't on this one. No window Shootme? I sort of like it, but I can see where it's 'different' enough from the rest of the background to actually distract.

Chaman, I told her she had some 'secret admirers' on this site :lol: I would like to shoot her in the studio, but she's pretty busy with work and college so don't know if you'll see her again or not.

-G

Please..try to convince her.:cryin:

[GB1]

Thks Dray, Jet. I guess it is a simple, straightforward shot. Dray, I don't think I can convincingly put any light in her eyes in a reasonable amount of time - still working on those PP skills - but I tried a vignette. Also bumped up the saturation a tad. Here it is!

Chaman, will try to get her to create a Model Mayhem account or something so you can communicate directly with her and try to twist her arm..

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[draymorton]

GB - whatever you did there, I really like it!

She's not on Model Mayhem yet?