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    Still Life with Oranges.

    What do you think about the composition?

    (For whatever reason the upload looks a little soft to me but in reality the focus and color are fine).
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    Re: Still Life with Oranges.

    I like the composition, particularly the face in the upper-right corner. Very colourful shot, works for me.

    Maybe it would have been a bit better with more diffused lighting? It seems a tad harsh, going by the heavy shadows.

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    Re: Still Life with Oranges.

    The softness I'll let go as you covered that but the light seems really harsh to me.
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    Re: Still Life with Oranges.

    I think it's too cluttered, I like the top left , the bag looks out of place.

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    Re: Still Life with Oranges.

    I like the composition but it is really kind of harsh and also looks a bit supersaturated.

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    Re: Still Life with Oranges.

    photo not easy, too much difference in light illuminated, area over exposure.
    Aperture more closed also for focus of te top.
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