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    free as a bird (Libera come l'aria)

    Model : NIKON D80
    ExposureTime : 1/750Sec
    FNumber : F8,0
    ExposureProgram : Aperture Priority
    ISOSpeedRatings : 200
    ExposureBiasValue : EV-0,5
    FocalLength : 400,00(mm)
    FocalLength(35mm) : 600(mm)
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    Re: free as a bird (Libera come l'aria)

    Nice composition, bad light and there is no foreground or background to add context.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: free as a bird (Libera come l'aria)

    thank you MB1 for your opinion.
    No foreground and no background are my intention, only a free stork and the sky.
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    Re: free as a bird (Libera come l'aria)

    Quote Originally Posted by frapuchi
    thank you MB1 for your opinion.
    No foreground and no background are my intention, only a free stork and the sky.
    Ciao e grazie
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    Then I think you should see how it looks with a bit tighter crop and perhaps saturate the sky some more.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: free as a bird (Libera come l'aria)

    thanks, I'll try
    ciao
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    Re: free as a bird (Libera come l'aria)

    Very nice capture, can you get the bird more to the top left corner? That may help with how the overall shot sits. S
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    Re: free as a bird (Libera come l'aria)

    I put it in that corner to show that the bird has a lot of free space ahead and above it to fly so the picture conveys a feeling of freedom.
    Spero di essermi spigato bene
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    Re: free as a bird (Libera come l'aria)

    Franco, your English and photography are fine. I look forward to see more from you. Cheers, S
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    Re: free as a bird (Libera come l'aria)

    Maybe if it were flying up, it would have that feeling of freedom or if it had some background that it was flying away from.
    As is, its a bird in the sky.
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    Re: free as a bird (Libera come l'aria)

    Wonderful picture I think.
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    Re: free as a bird (Libera come l'aria)

    Quote Originally Posted by shootme
    Franco, your English and photography are fine. I look forward to see more from you. Cheers, S
    Thanks, you are too kind
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    Re: free as a bird (Libera come l'aria)

    Quote Originally Posted by Frog
    Maybe if it were flying up, it would have that feeling of freedom or if it had some background that it was flying away from.
    As is, its a bird in the sky.
    Thanks, I have understood.
    "Stork oasis" is a protected area 1 mile far of my home

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    and for me is easy to return in that place when the weather be beautiful and try again.
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    Re: free as a bird (Libera come l'aria)

    Quote Originally Posted by jordanjez193
    Wonderful picture I think.
    thanks also to you
    ciao Francio
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    Re: free as a bird (Libera come l'aria)

    Love the minimalist feeling to this. well done.
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    Re: free as a bird (Libera come l'aria)

    Quote Originally Posted by LeeIs
    Love the minimalist feeling to this. well done.
    I am happy that you like my photo.
    By and good weekend
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    Last edited by frapuchi; 03-07-2009 at 02:44 AM.
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