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B&W works for me, though would also like to see the color version too (if possible).
As for composition, I do wish that you had included more on the right side instead of the left. I'm not sure if the current composition is well-balanced, try cropping heavily to zero in on the top-right corner, see if that helps.
I like the B&W but I'm not sure what you are seeing here or what you are trying to present. Is it the texture or the start of the arch. The way it is the composition just doesn't work for me. I would try shooting this subject at several different angles and distance to give yourself more to work with as far as composition wise.
I don't think there is enough for me. Perhaps an increase in DOF would help?
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I like it in B&W and to me it looks good the way it is composition wise. But maybe you should try focusing somewhere further down the row and see how that looks to you.
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