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Thread: Lazy Day Cruise

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    Junior Member dkerr's Avatar
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    Lazy Day Cruise

    A few of the same. What changes would you make? Are they worth keeping?

    Please share your thoughts.
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    Re: Lazy Day Cruise

    I think the top photo would have been nice w/o the pier in the center acting
    as a divider. I think its distracting. Maybe find another angle and position to
    shoot from ?

    I do like the light reflecting on the water.

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    Re: Lazy Day Cruise

    I like the first one the best. I would crop out the foreground grass but leave the pier.

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    Re: Lazy Day Cruise

    The first is by far the best. I would crop half the sky and half the foreground water but leaving the pier...making it a landscape.
    It would help if the boat were in the left third instead of middle.
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    Re: Lazy Day Cruise

    Okay...thanks for the comments. Very helpful!

    Here is the first one cropped as suggested.
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    Re: Lazy Day Cruise

    Much better.

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    Re: Lazy Day Cruise

    I like your edit!

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