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Good subject(s). Forgive my rambling here but I'm typing as the thoughts come.
First thing I noticed is that it looks cotrived. Not saying it is but it looks so.
Second is the lack of detail in the wheelbarrow...hard to get with that white bg but fill flash might help. Third, I'm not enthralled with the straigh on and would prefer a different angle.
Srry if this sounds so negative.....I think you have some good subject here and well worth a re-shoot. The b/w works well.
If you shot in raw you might be able to do some fill light.
Nope not at all negative - this is what i need to improve my composition and technical side.
The shot was not contrived (at least not by me - i think it is set up on the farm as a photo opportunity though ) might try some post editing on it (did shoot in raw) and see what I can get.
Thanks again Frog!
Please ask before editing my photos.
Cheers
Robert.