Look up & Smile

[starriderrick]

You are being watched...Any ideas... Does this comp. work? Thanks

Rick
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50mm Shot in full auto mode.

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iso 250
i-TTL flash

[Addies Granddaddy]

Hmmmmmm. Can't make up my mind. I think it needs something to hold it together.....like, the reflection of a person looking up? JMHO.
John

[jetrim]

The idea is sound, but I'm not sure about the execution. The columns on the right are a little distracting and the reflection isn't clear enough to add significant interest to the shot. I do like the symetry of the ceiling grid and the glow at the far end. Agree w/ Addies Grandaddy that maybe adding another element would help - maybe even somebody with a camcorder videotaping the videotaper

[starriderrick]

Thanks for the feedback.Very good ideas.

Rick

[MB1]

I look at the roof line at the bottom as the horizon and it is not level which bothers me. Otherwise I like the idea and video taping sign and reflections add some interest.