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    Bus Window Sunset

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    Re: Bus Window Sunset

    Awesome colors. The second composition is the better of the two IMO.
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    Re: Bus Window Sunset

    Thanks EOS. I agree.

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    Re: Bus Window Sunset

    I too like the second shot but they both look over processed to me.

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    Re: Bus Window Sunset

    I do like the light in the first shot, though.

    Don, would it have been possible to get off the bus to get the "right" shot? With such a beautiful sunset, it would have killed me to miss it.
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    Re: Bus Window Sunset

    I prefer # 1. It's lack of spatial context makes it more interesting to me.
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    Re: Bus Window Sunset

    Thanks guys

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    Re: Bus Window Sunset

    Hi Don,
    The shots remind me "The ninth gate" by Polanski.
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    Re: Bus Window Sunset

    blood red eh?

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    Re: Bus Window Sunset

    Yes, the colour and the house.
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