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Yoyo, don't know what to say on this one, may need to come back later to comment. The colors are good, shame about the light pole and the red awning to the right. The poles and washing remind me a lot of my memorable time in Asia.
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The bottom of this one loses something for me. The whole photo is very symmetrical until...the bottom. Not as appealing as your recent efforts, but still very good. Maybe crop off at just above the street signs. I dunno, still a better cityscape than I am capable of.
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Wow.. wild shot. This photo looks a LOT larger than what it is! I think it needs a big print and framing. It really makes you think and would probably incite conversations. Nice job!
The only thing that seems a tad bit less than perfect is that the stores at the bottom seems not as exciting as the levels above them. Perhaps if there were more people there too. But still, very good.
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I have been back to this many times and still cannot get my head around what is wrong with it.
I feel that the biggest issue for me is the out of alignment canopy, if this was sorted then it would be ok even with the light.
I think you have the right number of people on the street though.
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Excellent. I love how you break up the repetition with the bottom row of shops. Simple at first, but the more you look at it the more detail there is to absorb. I love images like these.
I like the second shot without the lightpole and broken canopy, but to be honest, I like the tighter crop on the first photo, it seems to reveal more of the many smaller details that make your captures so incredibly interesting.
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