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    The Narrows Revisited

    After your suggestions on the lighting, I went back for another try....
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    Re: The Narrows Revisited

    I missed the other ones,I like the shot the only thing that sticks out to me is that the pylon is right in the center of the frame pretty much, almost creating two images

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    Re: The Narrows Revisited

    I like the way the diagonals break this up. Nice capture with the setting sun. I see what Themage is saying about the superstructure in the center, and maybe if you'd moved to the right for more of an oblique angle it would have created a better effect, but who's to say?
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    Re: The Narrows Revisited

    I remember your previous attempt at this photo.

    I have to say, I love this 10 times more than the previous :thumbsup:
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    Re: The Narrows Revisited

    I also think that the primary support column coming out of the water seems a bit too centered. I am not sure about how the thing leans at the top either - I might rotate it a bit to eliminate this.

    Very striking photo... That's true regardless of anything else.

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    Re: The Narrows Revisited

    Beautiful picture. It looks a little blurry but I like it a lot. The sunset behind it is very nice good job.
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    Re: The Narrows Revisited

    Really nice picture, I would maybe crop out the rocks on the buttom.

    Overall weel done.

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