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    Man and His Plant

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    Re: Man and His Plant

    Don, about the only nitpick I have is that the man should be closer to the plant, but that was out of your control. Another interesting POV. Thanks for posting it.
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    Re: Man and His Plant

    A nice contrasty B&W.

    I find the car and people in the background distracting, but there isn't much you can do I guess. I wanted to see more of the man as well.
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    Re: Man and His Plant

    I'm sorry but it was anothe rgrab shot from the bus and the lens was too long--he was sitting right beside the bus.

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    Re: Man and His Plant

    Don - Nice shot. I agree that seeing more of the man would be nice, but that fact that he's looking away and out of the frame (and away from the plant) creates an unusual scene, almost like he's ignoring it. Funny..

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