Tunnel vision

[starriderrick]

Hi ya'll. A 10mm night "experimental". The brick wall is true horizon.I removed some of the standing water with a simple clone tool mask.I would appreciate any, all C&C... good or bad... Thanks

Rick
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10mm
15 seconds @ F/10
iso 160
E.V. +3.0

[Greg McCary]

I think you should skew the top and bottom fixing the distortion. Nice work Rick I like it. A real since of late night lonliness. If you want me to I will take a shot at the distortion? But I like the sign leaning...

[danic]

I'm the exact opposite. I like the distortion, but not the lean.

[starriderrick]

Go for it Greg! Thanks.
-danic. I like the distortion as well...

Rick

[gahspidy]

I like this too. I like the distortion, but would suggest trying to get the image even in the frame. Crop some from the right side so the entire structure is even right and left frame. Also, looks like an overall slight twist to the left, CCW, would straighten a bit.
looks good.

[Frog]

I like it and agree with Gary about the slight crop. This is one of those cases where it actually should be centered.
I see what people are talking about the distortion and lean but I sort of like them as it challenges my eyes. The skew(?) of the floor is what I find very interesting.

[Greg McCary]

Sorry for the delay. Rick

[starriderrick]

Wow! G' That's a great improvement.Thanks for taking the time.I appreciate that. :O)

Rick