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    Conversation 1

    Not sure about this one. c&c welcome.
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    Re: Conversation 1

    Interesting idea, on my monitor you image seems a little dark. My eyes are pulled towards the lights inside the building and away from the subjects. The over all color saturation is a bit strong as well.

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    Re: Conversation 1

    I think the title should be: I need a ride home!!
    Great shot.
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    Re: Conversation 1

    Frog - Close. I see what you were shooting for, but I think the two fellows' faces are too hidden and there is not enough personality in the building to put the shot over the top. Also seems a little soft, weakening the shot. I am wondering if a crop would help ...

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    Re: Conversation 1

    Thankyou, Jim and Barry.
    It was quite dark when I took the shot and I've upped the exposure as much as I dare and also dimmed the bright light but maybe not enough.
    I'll try desaturating, too. The greens are rather strong but close to what they actually are.
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    Re: Conversation 1

    I like this picture I just think it is a little dark. Overall though it is good. I especially like the pattern of the place behind the subject.

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    Thankyou, Naz! The darkness is pretty much as it was so I'm debating whether to bump the exposure or not.
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