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    Waiting for the Zombies

    A grab shot from the crowd. Interesting face.
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    Re: Waiting for the Zombies

    Hmmm. Don't know if that hair in the eyes works, but the expression suggests she's intently interested in whatever she's watching.
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    Re: Waiting for the Zombies

    I like her expression and the girl just behind her adds to the shot. But I find all the rest of the people back there too distracting even after you blurred them.

    If you like to draw or do graphic arts etc, parts of her face would make good source material. I really like how her lips form and the way her two teeth show. Her nose isn't bad either. (?)

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    Re: Waiting for the Zombies

    I think its great for a 'grab shot' and the tittle fits so well as she looks pretty zombied to me.
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    Re: Waiting for the Zombies

    Thanks Frog. I've enjoyed your work too. The title refers to the band that was getting ready play.....I saw her and her friend (the blond girl) walking around the festival. They seemed just fine. The hair in her face is just her 'look'. some things never change.
    I like this crop better. I removed the shoulder on the left. I think it helps the faces line up cleaner. If I didn't suck at photo shop I would burn some highlights around the top of her head. I don't like the dark object at the top of her.
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