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    Exclamation Portrait - Take two.

    Taken over looking the Ramon crater.
    I really liked the way this one looked so i brought it in.

    Portrait - Take two.-noam-portrait.jpg

    Please comment!

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    Re: Portrait - Take two.

    I really like this!

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    Re: Portrait - Take two.

    That light effect you put around his face missed the tip of his nose.

    I like the composition but not the effect, I think it is a bit too strong. Subtle would likely be better.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Portrait - Take two.

    thank you lori! and ill keep that in mind next time mb1 thank you!

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    Re: Portrait - Take two.

    I like the shot too, but agree w/ MB - the effect was a bit too much. Overall a good pic.

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    Re: Portrait - Take two.

    I like the composition and sort of like the effect but agree it may be a little too strong.

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