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Thread: Bench Seating

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    Bench Seating

    I kind of like the abstract look.

    I haven't done anything to it yet but I am likely to give it a small crop from the right to remove the sign.
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    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Bench Seating

    This is very good. I like the detail and exposure in the sky and the rest of the scene. Composition is good. Is that a dust spot in the middle left area of the sky? or a bird . ..
    i am thinking that straightening out the lens distortion on each side might look good and would eliminate the sign at the same time. The distortion here does not bother me and adds a little something to the image, but I am curious as to what it may achieve by straightening which would be very easy
    Great scene and well captured.
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    Re: Bench Seating

    Nice, I like it too..
    it maybe me but IMO it can use a tinny straighten to the right.
    I think the dust speck if from your sensor, most likely you can just blow it away with an airblower..
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    Re: Bench Seating

    The top left corner looks a little dark. Other than what has already been said that's it for me. Love the abstract look. Good BW. Great Shot

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    Re: Bench Seating

    I can find nothing to pick at. I do know why you'd want the sign gone, though.
    Great abstract full of mood!
    What place is this?
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    The Memorial Amphitheater

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    I..What place is this?
    Arlington National Cemetery
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Bench Seating

    Excellent shot. Love the angle and the semi-abstract feel... beautiful circular motion... great eye movement. B&W is a good decision. Gotta be proud of this one.
    (I agree with removing the sign.)
    Robert

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