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Thread: Loading Docks

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    Loading Docks

    So it seems that I haven't posted here in a long time. So maybe I might start agian soon with it being winter and all, but who knows. Only time will tell. Anyways heres my shot.



    Camera : Nikon D70s
    Lens : Nikkor 10.5mm DX Fisheye
    Flash : SB-800
    Aperture : f/5.6
    Shutter Speed : 10 Seconds

    Also the person standing in the picture had a speed light set as a slave in his hand.

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    Re: Loading Docks

    Welcome back. I like the scene. I think the assistant holding the speedlite should have stood way over to the right and out of the picture. Also, maybe a bit less flash exposure and a tad more exposure. Cropping out the darker area and mound of snow at the right will help.
    looking forward to more
    please do not edit and repost my photos


    gary


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    Re: Loading Docks

    I like the scene, too. I don't know much about speedlights or how to control flash but will say it looks tilted but that might be due to perspective.
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    Re: Loading Docks

    Oooooo, I like the fisheye distortion but I think you could have moved in on the building some more.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Loading Docks

    Very nice!!
    If you ask me to find something, then I would agree with The Skeptical Photographer though, to get rid of the bright subjects on the very left and the very right.

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