Tree Line

[Don Schaeffer]

Minolta Film SLR with 75-200 mm lens (about 135 mm)

[MB1]

Overall I wouldn't say that this is all that successful of an image although I find myself being drawn in so it works on some level.

My thoughts;

I am not sure that dividing the frame in half diagonally is such a good idea. There is something odd exactly in the middle of the bottom edge that bothers me.

Did you intend to have the tree line lead to the telephone pole in the bottom left? If so you did a nice subtle job of framing to get there......

[Don Schaeffer]

I tried to mask whatever it is behind the trees. It's not a pole.