Photo Critique Forum

Please post no more than five images a day and respond to as many images as you post. Critics, please be constructive, specific, and nice! Moderated by gahspidy and mtbbrian.
Featured Photo
Photo by hminx

Photo by hminx
Featured Photo Archive >>
By posting on the Photo Critique forum you agree to post only your own photos, be respectful, and give back as much as you receive. This is a moderated forum and anything abusive or off-topic will be removed.
Results 1 to 13 of 13
  1. #1
    Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2002
    Location
    Hamburg/Germany
    Posts
    182

    new years eve walk

    I took a walk today together with my mother.
    happy new year to everybody!
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails new years eve walk-new-years-eve-walk-640-breit.jpg  

  2. #2
    Junior Member
    Join Date
    Dec 2007
    Posts
    36

    Re: new years eve walk

    This is a nice shot but I think the sky is empty and dull and the place too. but anyways, I like the concept and the colors, very simple yet wonderful.
    I've taken every step in my life with appreciation that i may never pass this way again. Document memories with a camera on hand

  3. #3
    Newb Photographer
    Join Date
    Dec 2007
    Location
    Nottingham UK
    Posts
    88

    Re: new years eve walk

    I really like this shot, very bleak.

    Also like how you can see the footprints in the snow still..

    Shame some cars had ruined it before

  4. #4
    Film Forum Moderator Xia_Ke's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2007
    Location
    Mainahh
    Posts
    3,353

    Re: new years eve walk

    This is nice! I like the empty sky a lot and I also like the tire tracks. The sky creates a nice bleak feeling like motlive mentioned and the tire tracks create a nice line leading you through the frame. The only thing I would change is I would have panned the shot to the right a hair brining the left edge of the frame almost to the left side of the patch of trees and brining the road more into the frame.

    Happy New Year you as well
    Aaron
    Aaron Lehoux * flickr
    Please do not edit my photos, thank you.

  5. #5
    Moderator Didache's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2005
    Location
    London England
    Posts
    2,040

    Re: new years eve walk

    I like this picture. The copse of trees on the skyline is important I think because it fills that area nicely. I would also have pulled more of the road into it - although I like the picture, I feel the road looks a little "chopped off". If it had been entire, it would have led the eye into the picture better.

    Cheers
    Mike
    Mike Dales ARPS
    My website: www.mikedalesphotography.co.uk

  6. #6
    LRPS Alison's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2006
    Location
    UK
    Posts
    2,773

    Re: new years eve walk

    I really like it too. The tyre tracks and foot prints lead me right to the pedestrian.

  7. #7
    Senior Shooter Greg McCary's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2006
    Location
    Rome Ga.
    Posts
    10,550

    Re: new years eve walk

    I agree with the others a little more to the right putting the person more in the right hand third of the shot also showing more road. I also agree with Mike the trees are an important element but think to cropping out some of the sky, the foreground and a little off of the left frame would help.
    I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..

    Sony a99/a7R

  8. #8
    Grumpy Old Man Overbeyond's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2004
    Location
    Ireland (Now in London)
    Posts
    2,372

    Re: new years eve walk

    It's a rural landscape with great patterns, the right amount of colour, lovely geometric shapes and a sky as it should be given the conditions.
    The copse of trees on the hill aids the picture immensly and the tarmac revealed by passing traffic, plus the presence of your Mum and her foorprints, keeps the eyes happily busy. And of course it's Winter and it's cold and calm. A small point; a little swing of the camera to the right and it would be perfect. Nevertheless it's a great shot as it is.
    Good man there Engineer.
    http://www.overbeyond.com


    I have a total lack of respect for anything connected with society, except that which makes the roads safer, the beer stronger, the food cheaper, and the old men and old women warmer in the winter and happier in the summer. Brendan Behan

  9. #9
    Junior Member
    Join Date
    Dec 2007
    Location
    Ohio USA
    Posts
    9

    Re: new years eve walk

    I liked the dark/light contrast in the foreground. I would've preferred the person closer to the camera and a cropping of the trees on the right in order to show a solitary copse of trees. Wish I could do as well.

    AZ

  10. #10
    project forum co-moderator Frog's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2006
    Location
    wa state
    Posts
    11,195

    Re: new years eve walk

    It is a nice shot. I agree with a little more to the right and maybe with your mother a bit closer but nice as is.
    Keep Shooting!

    CHECK OUT THE PHOTO PROJECT FORUM
    http://forums.photographyreview.com/...splay.php?f=34

    Please refrain from editing my photos without asking.

  11. #11
    Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2002
    Location
    Hamburg/Germany
    Posts
    182

    Re: new years eve walk

    thanks for your comments. I agree that I should have moved my camera more to the right.
    the snow has melted already, I wonder if we will get snow again this winter at all, the global warming really seems to be there and changing everything.

  12. #12
    Member
    Join Date
    Dec 2007
    Location
    Sandy UT
    Posts
    394

    Re: new years eve walk

    I like this picture a lot. I agree with the suggestions about the road placement. My biggest issue with the picture is the lack of strong contrast between the earth and sky, I just wish there was more.

  13. #13
    Senior Member AgingEyes's Avatar
    Join Date
    Oct 2007
    Posts
    3,103

    Re: new years eve walk

    Good composition!

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •