Photo Critique Forum

Please post no more than five images a day and respond to as many images as you post. Critics, please be constructive, specific, and nice! Moderated by gahspidy and mtbbrian.
Featured Photo
Photo by hminx

Photo by hminx
Featured Photo Archive >>
By posting on the Photo Critique forum you agree to post only your own photos, be respectful, and give back as much as you receive. This is a moderated forum and anything abusive or off-topic will be removed.
Results 1 to 8 of 8

Thread: La Jolla Cove

  1. #1
    Coastal Flyer Coastal Flyer's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2006
    Location
    San Diego, CA USA
    Posts
    2,262

    La Jolla Cove

    Night work, taking advantage of the light from the full moon.

    CF
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails La Jolla Cove-la-jolla-cove-pr.jpg  
    Coastal Flyer

    :yikes:

  2. #2
    Member
    Join Date
    Sep 2007
    Location
    houston, texas, u.s.a
    Posts
    269

    Re: La Jolla Cove

    looks a bit like you had floodlights over your shoulder.

    the colour of the seawall looks a bit off, not quite right.

    did you pp at all ??

    i am hopefully looking forward to doing some evening shots fairly soon.

  3. #3
    Senior Shooter Greg McCary's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2006
    Location
    Rome Ga.
    Posts
    10,550

    Re: La Jolla Cove

    You have a really good composition again but I agree the color seems off. If you shot in Raw you might could change the White Balance. There also seems to be a little lens distortion as well.
    I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..

    Sony a99/a7R

  4. #4
    Coastal Flyer Coastal Flyer's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2006
    Location
    San Diego, CA USA
    Posts
    2,262

    Re: La Jolla Cove

    Threelions/Greg:

    Thanks for the comments. First, the shadow at lower left, I'll cop that out; it is from a life guard tower. I tried to get another vantage point but couldn't. The color, I suspect, is a combination of the full moon and the lousy high pressure sodium street lights. The only pp is sharpening.

    Greg: help me with the distortion in this shot...., where do you see it? This is a really good comment and appreciate the insight. No pun intended.

    Thanks again.

    CF

    P.S. Here is another shot where I used a custom white balance. Is this more what you had in mind? Do you see distortion in this shot also? Perhaps what you are seeing as distortion is in the jetty and the appearance that it "bends." It does, quite dramatically. Please let me know.
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails La Jolla Cove-la-jolla-cove-ii-pr.jpg  
    Last edited by Coastal Flyer; 11-26-2007 at 05:15 PM.
    Coastal Flyer

    :yikes:

  5. #5
    Member
    Join Date
    Sep 2007
    Location
    houston, texas, u.s.a
    Posts
    269

    Re: La Jolla Cove

    i like this one better, but it looks like a fish eye to me a bit.

    you need to get the city in the background but would a slightly lower angle work taken from the beach ???

    i love the cove though....

    could see me there with some friends, a bottle of wine, some cheese, bread and grapes....

    listening to the ocean.......i-pod playing the eagles....

    :cryin: :cryin: :cryin: :cryin: :cryin: :cryin: :cryin:

  6. #6
    MB1
    MB1 is offline
    The Skeptical Photographer MB1's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2004
    Location
    Washington, DC and Clermont, FL
    Posts
    3,144

    Re: La Jolla Cove

    I like the second image with the custom white balance. The first seems too yellow/green whereas I really like the rich, pure blues in the second image.

    The composition in both bothers me; I think because the pier is too close to the center of the image and there is about the same amount of blue water in the image above and below the pier. The other thing about both is that their is nothing in them to tell me that it is a moonlit night.

    Still, I find the second image quite pleasing.
    No, I DON'T need that.

  7. #7
    Coastal Flyer Coastal Flyer's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2006
    Location
    San Diego, CA USA
    Posts
    2,262

    Re: La Jolla Cove

    MB,

    Thanks for the comments here, too. I will have to think about how to convey a moon lit night in such images (?don't do them perhaps?). I had not considered that in the composition of the subject, I had only considered use of the light to capture the jetty. The colors are what the moon and lousy sodium vapor lights from a nearby parking lot had to offer. The entire area, cove/jetty, etc., was pitch black with very little or no detail visible to the eye. The only pp I did was a bit of sharpening. As for the overall composition, i.e., same amount of land above and below the jetty is a good catch and appreciate that.

    Thanks,

    CF
    Coastal Flyer

    :yikes:

  8. #8
    Senior Member readingr's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2004
    Location
    Basingstoke UK
    Posts
    4,564

    Re: La Jolla Cove

    CF,

    I like this a lot, especially the lighting you managed to achieve in the other later one.

    Roger
    "I hope we will never see the day when photo shops sell little schema grills to clamp onto our viewfinders; and the Golden Rule will never be found etched on our ground glass." from The mind's eye by Henri Cartier-Bresson

    My Web Site: www.readingr.com

    DSLR
    Canon 5D; EF100-400 F4.5-5.6L IS USM; EF24-70 F2.8L USM 50mm F1.8 II; EF 100 F2.8 Macro
    Digital
    Canon Powershot Pro 1; Canon Ixus 100


Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •