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    Tests of the Minolta Film SLR

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    Re: Tests of the Minolta Film SLR

    Hi Don,

    The first shot is good except I would have not had the pole/tree in the foreground.

    Your second image to too far away from the workers or is that what you wanted?

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    Re: Tests of the Minolta Film SLR

    I really like that first shot Don. The sky is awesome! The poll/tree is in an okay shot composition wise but, my only nitpick is since it's in the shot, I wish it was a little clearer as to what it was.

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    Re: Tests of the Minolta Film SLR

    Good point about the pole (a telephone pole).

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