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    Website

    The B&W pic is one I'm planning on using for the intro image for my website. I have also posted the original. Feel free to edit or suggest other viewpoints.
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    Last edited by sten0016; 11-15-2007 at 04:48 PM.
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    Re: Website

    I like the b/w. Might want to give it a bit more space above.
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    Re: Website

    It might be ok full size for a web page but it is way too small and detailed for a Avatar.

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    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Website

    I wanted to have a bit of a mystery behind the image so people would click and be able to see the whole thing.
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    Re: Website

    Quote Originally Posted by Frog
    I like the b/w. Might want to give it a bit more space above.
    I didn't want to give too much at the top. Above will be the menu for the page.


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    Re: Website

    I personally do not feel this image is strong enough to be used as the lead-in to a website.
    I think the subject is not isolated enough. The twigs and reeds in the foreground are distracting and blurry. I would try to get this shot again by waiting for a better lighting condition such as early morning or late afternoon and physically removing some of the distracting elements around the subject. I would compose this so that there is more of the subject in the frame including some more of it's surrounds and landscape. OR, just zoom in tight on the seat with all other elements eliminated.
    This is only my opinion and just trying to offer suggestions.
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