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    Incoming Storm

    Light was pretty bad yesterday but caught the edge of a very threatening storm coming in from behind me. Liked the mood of the picture.

    Schred me.....I have lots to learn.

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    Re: Incoming Storm

    Do you have a split ND filter? This would be the perfect shot for one as I think the foreground and more so the trees on the left are way too dark.

    It needs something more in the foreground too (or just less foreground-you could crop much closer to the horizon as all that water adds little).

    I am not sure if the lack of overall color works here but I am a bright bold intense colors kind of guy.....
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Incoming Storm

    I don't have an ND filter.

    The storm caused the colors to move more to grey & dingy...which is how the picture came out.

    I thought the wind & rain on the water in the foreground and the shapes it took was enouhg.......I guess not.

    I'll play with the crop & I'll also try lightening the trees.

    Thanks for the comments. I've never shot such a scene before.

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    Re: Incoming Storm

    I rarely shoot landscapes without one of my split ND filters. Most often I use the 2 stop version but I will also combine the 1 & 2 stops sometimes.....

    Something no landscape photographer should be without.

    BTW all those tow path pix I posted were shot with the 2 stop.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Incoming Storm

    Lots to learn............

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    Re: Incoming Storm

    Your image has recreated the mood of the expected storm very well indeed. The water, especially with its slight movement, gives off a very cold feel and makes for a very good foreground.
    By selecting the area around the dark trees you may well be able to show some detail with a a careful Levels adjustment but it is a nice image as it is and I would imagine a large print of this would look very well.
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    Re: Incoming Storm

    Quote Originally Posted by MB1
    I rarely shoot landscapes without one of my split ND filters.
    Hammer - nail ?
    Or is it really necessary ?
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    Re: Incoming Storm

    Quote Originally Posted by MB1
    I rarely shoot landscapes without one of my split ND filters.
    I hardly ever use mine - I use the polariser a lot more.

    Funny that.

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    Re: Incoming Storm

    Interesting abstract photo--it looks like a simple parallel planes painting with sea and land details superimposed. As a photo it looks like it might have been artificially made. The clouds don't look genuine.

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    Necessary?

    Quote Originally Posted by SmartWombat
    Hammer - nail ?
    Or is it really necessary ?
    Well I find it really helps with the strong light I like. Of course I don't enjoy doing any post processing, you could probably get the same results by taking 2 shots and combining them in PS but I have no interest in doing that.

    I also carry a polarizer but rarely use it as it does strange things to the sky with the very wide angle lenses I like to use.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Incoming Storm

    Quote Originally Posted by Don Schaeffer
    Interesting abstract photo--it looks like a simple parallel planes painting with sea and land details superimposed. As a photo it looks like it might have been artificially made. The clouds don't look genuine.
    It's almost straight out of the camera.

    A small adjustment to contrast and a crop.

    Here is one a little later at a different place with no adjustments.

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