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    Parker Senior photos.

    My friend asked me to do his senior photos. how did I do?



    I think this one is for the yearbook.
    I don't want it, I just need it...to breath ...to feel ...to know I'm alive.

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    Re: Parker Senior photos.

    The first one looks a little too contrasty and a little soft. Technically, the second one is much better, but the pose.....?
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    Re: Parker Senior photos.

    hahaha, the 2nd one is hillarious. I think you picked the right spot, with those small trees in teh back ground, it definitely gives off the feeling that he'd climbed a big mountain and just reached its peak.
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    Re: Parker Senior photos.

    I am not in a place to offer technical critique but I have to say that the second one is like no senior picture I have seen before. I love the goofy-ness with the beautiful scenery.
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    Re: Parker Senior photos.

    I have been working on my senior portraits, I think I would have warmed and sharpened the first one and called it good. Second one is for sure the winner here, don't be afraid to be brave.

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    Re: Parker Senior photos.

    I'd love to see that second one in a yearbook.

    Go for it!
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Parker Senior photos.

    boys, I hope those rock are not so sharp. could da hurt some ( body )

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