Where are we going mommy?

[Frog]

If any remember my 'angles' shot the place drives me nuts trying to get something there.
So I sacrificed my self to the crowds I knew would exist on the last weekend of the fair.
I tried different props and even did my own self modeling, rather poorly. This was actually going to be a shot with me near the back wall when this mother and child wandered through the scene so I pressed the remote to see what I'd get.
Impressions?

[MB1]

Well, it is too grey (pop the contrast or increast the exposure till the walls are white) and I would rotate it to the left a bit till one of the lines is true vertical.

I think the mom and kid are a great capture and I like their reflection.

You just may have something here.....

[PrevailingConditions]

Frog,

I like the previous version better. The positioning of the mother and child don't really add to the story because I don't see the context for why they're there.

PC

[Frog]

Maybe this one works better with color?
I edited with capture nx which I'm just beginning to learn to use.
All comments, good or bad, welcome.

[Frog]

oops....thought I had cropped it with the light gone and much of the right.

[MB1]

Maybe this one works better with color?
I edited with capture nx which I'm just beginning to learn to use.
All comments, good or bad, welcome.

Well I like the look of the floor. There is too much celing but I don't have a problem with the wall on the right. Since the color here is muted it seems to fit.