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    Shy Girls

    Shot in a back alley in Chengdu Sichuan Province..

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    Re: Shy Girls

    Very nice Jurgen. Your great sharpness and exposure was really needed here to seperate those heads of hair, well done. Excellent conversion to mono too.
    I had my ears syringed in the park in Chengdu while watching the senior citizens dancing.
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    Re: Shy Girls

    Quote Originally Posted by Overbeyond
    I had my ears syringed in the park in Chengdu while watching the senior citizens dancing.
    Ummmmmmm,,,do you want to explain this one for us??

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    Re: Shy Girls

    Great capture of a wonderful candid moment. Nice choice for b&w too :thumbsup: Hope things are going well for you over there. Looking to seeing lots of wonderful shots

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    Re: Shy Girls

    Wonderful emotion captured Jurgen. Nice to see you still posting.

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    Thanks Alison & Aaron,,,,do you want the tenner now or later??

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    Re: Shy Girls

    Yes, very nice capture. There is a bit of distraction in the back behind them, but it still separates nicely.

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    Re: Shy Girls

    Quote Originally Posted by yogestee
    Ummmmmmm,,,do you want to explain this one for us??

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    I think I know this one.

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    Re: Shy Girls

    This is a fun image.

    I'm thinking you could lighten it a bit and crop some off the left to really focus in on the smiling girl.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    What do you think MB1?? The jury is still out here..

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    Re: Shy Girls

    I don't know about MB but I like the tight crop better.
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    Re: Shy Girls

    I like the tighter crop better as well. It's still too dark where the first and second girls' heads meet. Too much detail lost. At the same time, something looks wrong with the lightening you've already done. The tones look artificial. If you shot this in RAW maybe you can play with EXP compensation.
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