Adios Chick Hall's Surf Club!

[CLKunst]

Another one bites the dust! Chick Hall's Surf Club, Bladensburg, Maryland.
The last of the D.C./Maryland line Honky Tonks. 1955-2007. It was fun while it lasted.

Your comments and critique are welcomed and appreciated. Suggestions cheerfully explored.

[MB1]

I like the night photograph and the colors very much but that text on the top of the image isn't working for me.

[CLKunst]

OK, I'm open for suggestions. Type color change, different font, blank sky?

What about this?

[MB1]

You are moving in the right direction. How about you make your text roughly match the actual sign? Then it wouldn't overwhelm your shot.

[Greg McCary]

I agree with MB1 that the logo is getting close to the right size, maybe just a little smaller. I really am not sure I like the bottom of the frame. Are you shooting through a car window? I think I would like it better if it was just a shot of the club.
Greg