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    Junior Member Jaffar's Avatar
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    homeless in paris

    Good morning everybody

    I was browsing thru pictures I took this summer, I stopped in Paris for a couple of days before heading to Normandy, anyway, These are two pics I played with in PS, added some grain and contrast and done some cropping.

    Thanks to all for feedbacks
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    Re: homeless in paris

    I'm afraid I'm not a fan of the grain. Try going with the original and maybe vignetting the corners a bit for the 2nd pic. The left pic is just to narrow an angle to be captivating.
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    banished Don Schaeffer's Avatar
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    Re: homeless in paris

    Too much detail in the face and in the center of the photo is lost to underexposure and grain-like distortion. The photo is the tower wold have been interesting if it didn't have jaggies.

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