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Thread: Colours

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    Colours

    yellow red and blue (and grey)
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    Re: Colours

    Hi there .. this is a picture just trying to get out I think! I had a look at your user gallery and it is clear that you are a photographer seeking to find new angles on things. This is a case in point. The barrier, the blue box, the lines on the wall, the primary colours all should conspire to make a strong graphical image. As it is though, and with the amount of ground it contains, it looks a little less abstract than it could be. If the barrier were more diagonal it would help, as would cloning out a few details such as the plate on the blue box. Maybe get closer and use a wider angle?

    Do you have opportunity to visit this again? I really think this could pay off.

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    Re: Colours

    thanks Mike, I appreciate your comment. I am going to go back to that place again and try again.
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    Benjamin

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    Re: Colours

    I would like to see this with the saturation blasted off the chart. As it is I think the colors are too bland and the yellow worst of all.

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