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Hi there .. this is a picture just trying to get out I think! I had a look at your user gallery and it is clear that you are a photographer seeking to find new angles on things. This is a case in point. The barrier, the blue box, the lines on the wall, the primary colours all should conspire to make a strong graphical image. As it is though, and with the amount of ground it contains, it looks a little less abstract than it could be. If the barrier were more diagonal it would help, as would cloning out a few details such as the plate on the blue box. Maybe get closer and use a wider angle?
Do you have opportunity to visit this again? I really think this could pay off.