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    Where is The Stars?

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    Re: Where is The Stars?

    Well done YoYo. The composition and exposure are perfect. You really nailed this one. How did you expose this without blurring the people at the bottom?
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    Re: Where is The Stars?

    Hi Greg,
    Thanks for the kind words. The shot was taken with an 800 ASA film at f, 2.0 and 1/30s.
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    Re: Where is The Stars?

    Well done, yoyo. I love the subtle exposure in the fg.
    good work
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    Re: Where is The Stars?

    Excellent night exposure. Well done.Film rocks!









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    Re: Where is The Stars?

    Yoyo, I agree with everyone else. The exposure is great. However, I'm not crazy about the tree and the awning intruding on the building.
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    Re: Where is The Stars?

    Hi Gary, Thanks for the kind words. I also like the exposure on the passers-by.

    Hi Rick, Thanks for the compliments.

    Hi John, You have pointed out my main worry. I also dont like the canopy on the right.

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    Re: Where is The Stars?

    Yoyo.......congratulations on the sticky. Well earned.
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    Re: Where is The Stars?

    Hi John,
    Thanks for the kind words. I am very happy that the shot was chosen as the featured photo.
    yoyo

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    Re: Where is The Stars?

    I am sorry, I guess I lost here in your thread.
    Which stars are you talking about?
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    Re: Where is The Stars?

    Congratulation on the feature.

    There are only one or two things to comment on:

    1. I like this scene and how you've managed to compose and capture it.
    2. The support rod to the roof/awning along the right intrudes . . .

    The awning I didn't care for at first but it does provide some visual balance to the tree at left. The buildings urban environment presents a challenge for acheiving a clean visual presentation. It works well in context.

    Very glad to see this one and again I like it and congratulations on the feature!
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    Re: Where is The Stars?

    Congratulations on the sticky yoyo !! I like the angle of view that you have chosen for this and the resulting contrasts in this image, the menacing looking Dior sign with the shadowed teeth / icicles and hurrying figures below, very interesting stuff...

    Well done!

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    Re: Where is The Stars?

    Hi drg, Thanks for sharing your perspective. Yes, I also find it difficult to shoot buildings most of the time.

    Hi Herriot, How are you doing? It is very hot here in Hong Kong (33 degree C today); I hope it is better in Singapore. I like your interpretation which I have not thought about. It makes sense to me.

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    Re: Where is The Stars?

    Impressive work, yoyo. The human silhouettes are a nice finishing touch.

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    Re: Where is The Stars?

    Hi yoyo,
    Never seen a building lit like that. I like Herriot's interpretation and the sillouetted people below.
    Congrats on the sticky. Sorry I posted so late.
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