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    photo gallery Mod. starriderrick's Avatar
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    Open for business

    I think Tyson suggested "Try shooting this tight" Here it is again... Sunbeam cleaners.
    What do you think? Is the cleaner still open or shut it down?

    #2 was shot on a different evening.Nice sky, that's it.

    Your thoughts...If you please.
    Thanks
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    Re: Open for business

    There's something wierd going on with both of these. Not necessarily bad weird, just strange. The top shot seems waaaay too blue. There's a great sky going on in #2, but I'm seeing a halo around the most prominant tree. Accident or design?
    John

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    Re: Open for business

    Accident...probably from extream contrast boost.
    I almost cloned out that tree for that reason. These 2 images are a futile attempt to fix under exposed high contrast shots. I should have shot in RAW.
    I did some "lazy" adjustments to try"saving" the unsaveable"
    The blue is the result of a circ. polar filter.Saturation boost till it bled...

    These are not really that well thought out as you can see.
    Thanks for keeping it real. LOL









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