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    Abandoned Depot

    Does the antenna go or stay? I kind of like it.
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    Re: Abandoned Depot

    I'd have to say "go." Mostly because it's leaning. Otherwise, I like the composition. Not sure if you used a polarizer, but that might have helped darken the blue in the sky. The foreground could use a little more contrast too, but I'm not on a reliable monitor right now, so don't put too much weight in that comment.

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    Re: Abandoned Depot

    Looks good greg, not as good as my sunset but good. LOL

    Can you darken the sky any?

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    Re: Abandoned Depot

    The antenna doesn't go with the rest of the photo. Cut it down.
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    Re: Abandoned Depot

    If you like it, that's what counts.
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    Re: Abandoned Depot

    Here's the edit with it cut down.With a little crop too.


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    Re: Abandoned Depot

    Rather than cut the antenna out... how does the shot look from the other direction?

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    Re: Abandoned Depot

    The other direction the track crosses a road and the angle wouldn't be as strong.
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    Re: Abandoned Depot

    I still like it there but maybe if only the antenna was gone and the pole stayed?
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    Re: Abandoned Depot

    I like the new crop, and the missing pole is a plus as well, and you probably know what I would have done in addition :lol:

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    Re: Abandoned Depot

    I prefer the one without the antenna. I think the antenna was a bit too long. But I think the 2nd one is a bit too contrasty.
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    Re: Abandoned Depot

    Quote Originally Posted by Mr Yuck
    I like the new crop, and the missing pole is a plus as well, and you probably know what I would have done in addition :lol:

    excellent composition and subject.
    I tried an HDR but for some reason the results were not good. But it was my intention all along. That's one reason I didn't use a polarizer. I guess I learn another lesson.
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    Re: Abandoned Depot

    Great shot, but I love old structures.
    I would agree with Frog, the pole would go with the photo
    but the antenna needed to go.
    Both look good.

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    Re: Abandoned Depot

    Good shot... I like the version you posted on NEF best... I would rather have the pole and antenna... and in B&W... the antenna is part of the shot... and seeing a depot used or unused without it kinda throws up a sign for me... but then again I see depots all the time so I am used to seeing them there...
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