"The Computers Are Down"

[Overbeyond]

Wire cutter suspected.:mad2:
Critique if possible please.
Thanks
Tom

[Tyson L. Sparks]

Interesting shot! I have nothing to say other than it looks nice. Great job.

[mondo1090]

very nice i like the colors, its alot to look at but thats not a bad thing

[readingr]

Tom,

I really like this, so much to see; and being old I recognise one of those terminals, Can't remember what we called it back then but its a VT100 with a floppy on the side I think.

My one critique is that I would have liked to see the floor where the pillars come down.

Other than that I like the colours and the composition even though it doesn't follow the normal rules.

Roger

[ZL4life]

I'd like to see even more in the frame, a wider angle. This seems too cramped to me, i'm not even sure what i'm looking at

[Mr Yuck]

this is awesome, so much going on in the photo, but well done. Great colors and I really like this composition

[Overbeyond]

Many thanks to you all.
Tom

[GB1]

Tom - It has potential but the overall composition is not very creative. I think you probably should have got in closer or taken it from a lower angle (or higher angle). I love the title, but if I were looking at it w/o the title or a caption I think I would have difficulty making it out to be computers.

GB

[poker]

I'd like to see even more in the frame, a wider angle. This seems too cramped to me, i'm not even sure what i'm looking at

I somewhat feel the same although the random texture of the shot has its own value. Maybe some type of creative program filter can provide extra appeal?