Another Image

[jhousman6]

This is the same girl as one of my other images.. but different lighting.. your thoughts on this one. Critiquing helps me learn

[starriderrick]

Nice work ! Her eyes are amazing. This is an attractive subject, the composition is excellent. I find nothing to fault here.

[MarcusK]

Not so sure about that....so i will keep the comments personal to what i feel rather than technically...

I dont like much the close up tilted head....and would prefer the crop to be looser....more of the head showing and no cutting of the arms....

You're pretty good at capturing expressions though....:thumbsup:

Marc

[Jaedon]

My only complaint is that I find teh focus to be too soft for my liking. Her eyes are teh sharpest part of the frame however which is a good thing, but her lips (which I think are essential in shots like this) are 'fuzzy'.

[jhousman6]

My only complaint is that I find teh focus to be too soft for my liking. Her eyes are teh sharpest part of the frame however which is a good thing, but her lips (which I think are essential in shots like this) are 'fuzzy'.

any ideas on how to get everything on the face in focus using the olympus e500. I shot this one in portrait mode. Any ideas will help and Thank you for your comments and time