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    Clowning around with trains

    I was shooting pictures of a band in front of an old abandoned railroad car when a train passed by on a nearby track. I grabbed a couple of images with my Canon A630 point and shoot. For some reason there was a passenger dressed as a clown hanging out of one of the cars (I'd really like to know the story behind that). Anyway, I grabbed this shot right as he passed by.


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    Re: Clowning around with trains

    that's priceless!

    I love how oblivious the guy in sunglasses is.

    "Uh hi...yeah, you're taking my picture, I dont know why..."
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    Re: Clowning around with trains

    awesome picture you captured a great moment!
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    Re: Clowning around with trains

    Excellent catch indeed.Besides the clown and the man and child, I also like the various bits of anatomy sticking out of the windows further down the train.
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    Re: Clowning around with trains

    Great moment. I would imagine the man does not realize that the clown, right next to him, is the center of attention. Sharp where it needed be. Well done
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    Re: Clowning around with trains

    I like it, but would rather see a color version. I just think clowns work better with color. Or maybe color him and leave the rest in B&W. Just a thought
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    Re: Clowning around with trains

    oooooo yes yes yes......color him only....yes i would love to see that too....

    My first reaction when i saw the pic was "hey the sky is blown maaannnnn..." but then i looked at it and read your post, and i wouldn't have it any other way... nice reflexes....

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    Re: Clowning around with trains

    This is a great example of how a photo that has lots of "technical faults" can still be successful due to the moment and subject matter caught. I am only curious as to whether you have done any post processing here because it is odd that the entire window area of the whole length of the train is sharp and all the wheels and top area of the entire length is blurry. I still find the picture very captivating and it sure works for me.
    Good catch
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    Re: Clowning around with trains

    Wow - I made "sticky" status. Thanks again for all the compliments.... Sorry, I haven't been visiting the forums much this week - had a lot of stuff going on in the "real world".

    Gary - yes, I blurred sections of the photo post processing. I hope I didn't do too much of a hatchet job, I'm still not proficient with photo shop and other photo editors. I like doing this a lot in my photo's to emphasize certain areas. Its something I picked up in college when I was shown some beautiful portraits done with a large format camera. The photographer tilted/shifted the lens to blur out some portions and emphasize others. For me it was very striking and I've always tried to emulate it. Digitally its easier - although I suppose there could be a tendancy to overuse it. Hopefully I haven't crossed that line. ;)

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    Re: Clowning around with trains

    If you guys will indulge me, here's some other examples of this, ahem "technique"... ;) First one is a portrait of my little sister. (I was chasing family members around at a bbq with a 'blad. Hehe...)



    and on this one I was trying to emphasize the similarities between the vine and the barbed wire on the pole. Maybe give it a little sense of motion or something too....


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    Re: Clowning around with trains

    Quote Originally Posted by ravenmore
    If you guys will indulge me, here's some other examples of this, ahem "technique"... ;) First one is a portrait of my little sister. (I was chasing family members around at a bbq with a 'blad. Hehe...)



    clip...
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    Re: Clowning around with trains

    I think that since the clown goes "unnoticed" by the other passengers that he should be the black and white in the image, and everything else in color. can we see an version of this image like that?

    he would still draw attention, but the black and white would represent that he was out of place and unnoticed by others.
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    Re: Clowning around with trains

    I'll see what I can do - my digital editing skills are somewhat limited. Maybe this will be a good excersize and teach me a new trick or two.

    I think by bluring the top and the bottom of the train I was trying to draw attention to the "menagerie" of the passengers. And here again maybe to imply movement also.

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    Re: Clowning around with trains

    Although I noticed it was not "natural" the blur, I think your PP works well to emphasize the subjects on the train. For me personally, I would not like to see a mix of b&w and color in this one. It looks like a classic shot as it is.
    The photo of your sister is precious, but I will admit that I'm not a big fan of the technique when it comes to portraits. Having only the eyes looking like they are popping off the screen lends to an intrigueing image but I'm just not won over by the effect. Still a very nice shot, as well as the vines and barbed wire piece.
    Good work
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    Re: Clowning around with trains

    Nice Pic...

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    Re: Clowning around with trains

    Hehe - wow. Made "featured photo" status. Thanks for the kind words everyone....

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