Triptych

[PMW518]

This is my first try at a triptych of any sort. Does this work? I wasn't sure what order to put the three images in. What could be done to make it work better? What do you guys think about it? Thanks in advance for any input.

Phil

[Seb]

This is my first try at a triptych of any sort. Does this work? I wasn't sure what order to put the three images in. What could be done to make it work better? What do you guys think about it? Thanks in advance for any input.

Phil

I like your presentation. It certainly works for me. The only issue that I can see is that the center picture isn't quite as saturated as the two others. The tone seems cooler and I would have expected uniform colors. Other than that, I definately like it.

Seb

[gahspidy]

I agree with Seb. The presentation works for me. I think it is good that you placed the cord image in the middle as it is the only one with the solid light bg and different for that matter. Having it in the middle balances the other two. I see what Seb is saying about the tone, but I think it is the nature of the cord being not quite as yellow as the phone and the wall being lighter in shade as well. Being that it is in the middle, I think it still works well like this. Good work

[readingr]

I'm with the Seb and Gary, nicely done. this is the first Triptych thats made me want to try one. I need to go and look for a subject to try now.

I can see what Seb means about the middle. Try toning down the background a tad while keeping the cord the same could possible improve the middle one. But hey not sure if I'd bother personally.

Roger