Urban Sunset

[PMW518]

What do people think about this shot?
Any comments/critiques welcome.

Phil

[gahspidy]

I think you have something here with potential. Aside from the image looking rather soft, I think the inclusion of the nearest pole on the right was not needed. When I crop from the right just enough to eliminate the pole, leaving only two poles, the image becomes stronger and better balanced.. I like what you have sought to capture here, and even with it's softness, I like the effect.

[PMW518]

Thanks for the input gahspidy, I think that I like it better with the crop as you suggested. I am deffinately still learning and have a long ways to go, and its great to get such good help from all the great people that know so much and are willing to help.
I was happy with how well it turned out for being a a quick snap out of a car on the highway, just a little burning and a little tweak of the colors.

[gahspidy]

Yes, thats it. much better. Well, shooting out of a car explains the lack of sharpness here, but as I said, it still looks good. Stick around, we all learn from eachother here.