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    (Un)Natural Power

    Does this do anything for anybody?
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    Re: (Un)Natural Power

    The composition doesn't do a whole bunch for me, but I love the stormy Midwestern sky and would like to see more of that.
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    Re: (Un)Natural Power

    Loupey,

    I drive up and down the central valley of California a couple times a year. For miles there are high tension lines on gigantic structures. I have often wondered if that would make for a dynamic photo but never stop. The best part of this photo, at least for me, is the very dynamic sky. I love a good shot of clouds; they give so much personality to an image.

    So, I like your shot for that.

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    Re: (Un)Natural Power

    Thanks, EOS3 and CF for taking the time to look and comment!

    FWIW, my wife thinks its a boring image I keep coming to this location as I am trying to get a lightening strike during the day. As it is, I think there is not enough connection between the wires and the clouds.

    Once the rains came, I had to pack it in and make a run for the truck
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    Re: (Un)Natural Power

    I don't find it boring at all. I like the way the power lines move through the picture. If only there was lightning.
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    Re: (Un)Natural Power

    i really like this photo i like the look of the power line and structure and i love the sky it adds a mysterious look to it.
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    Re: (Un)Natural Power

    Greg - thanks for the comments. I'll definitely let the wife know A few more unseasonably warm 60+ degree days before the snows come. The lightening shot will have to wait until next spring

    J-Dogg - I really appreciate your views. Thanks!
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    Re: (Un)Natural Power

    [QUOTE=Loupey] FWIW, my wife thinks its a boring image I keep coming to this location as I am trying to get a lightening strike during the day. As it is, I think there is not enough connection between the wires and the clouds.QUOTE]

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    Re: (Un)Natural Power

    I think it is a good subject and it works ok for me. I think though, having more of the pole in the shot, say a vertical comp, would be stronger. Also having the pole lit up a bit more by the natural light would help as well. Try doing a slight levels adj hre and see what happens.
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    Re: (Un)Natural Power

    Quote Originally Posted by Ronnoco

    Listen to your wife, Loupey.

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    That's odd... that's exactly what my mother-in-law says all the time!

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    Re: (Un)Natural Power

    Quote Originally Posted by gahspidy
    I think it is a good subject and it works ok for me. I think though, having more of the pole in the shot, say a vertical comp, would be stronger. Also having the pole lit up a bit more by the natural light would help as well. Try doing a slight levels adj hre and see what happens.
    Gary, I appreciate your insight and advice. I will work with the image some more.

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    Re: (Un)Natural Power

    How about holding your camera vertically, I'd like to see more of the lines, lightning would be cool, but the dark sky like this would work great when complemented with a wider shot of the lines.
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    Re: (Un)Natural Power

    Loupey,

    Finally decided I like it.

    However saying that I agree with Gary about the vertical crop.

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