Scene V- Different Train

[Coastal Flyer]

The first shot had very harsh lights from the on-coming train. Here is a different image with a different train. Does this make a difference?

CF

[eaglesona]

I think you captured American Plaza Transfer Station very well (I go through it every time I go to airport. I never though it could look this good

The one thing I notice is that the picture seems to be slightly rotated counter clockwise but I tend to notice things like that so this just may be my personal pet peve. I also think that perhaps the lower right hand corner is a bit dark, perhaps you might want to crop it off, but that also may be my own personal Opinion.

[smelly]

I agree with eaglesona about the color disparity. I think the best way to deal with that is to get a bit lower, cut of some of the top (where the lights are washing out anyway), and get more of the yellow lines.
The roof line and angle of the train makes it feel like everything is running out of the left side of the photo. If you got further back perhaps you get some of the other side of the train.

I like the slight movement of the train, and the architecture is very photogenic. I think this is a location that is worth going back to. Nice work!

[Coastal Flyer]

Smelly/Eaglesona:

Thanks very much for the comments, I appreciate you taking the time.

CF