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    soccer

    i got out today and tried some shots at the soccer game. heres a few of the good ones that i did get. This was my first shot (pun only slightly intended) at sports action and any comments and critiques are welcome and greatly appreciated.
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    Re: soccer

    In each of those photos I would crop everything out but the 2 players nearest the ball.

    Except for the lighting (which I know you had no control over) I like the bottom photo the best as you presented them (even this one IMHO would improve with a bit of croping).

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    Re: soccer

    1 and 3 are good action shots and I agree cropping would improve them.

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    Re: soccer

    do these crops help at all?, thanks again for any comments.
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    Re: soccer

    Yes, the crops improve things although the middle one doesn't work for me. #1 and #3 have a flow and great facial expressions. #2 just makes the girl in white look awkward to me.

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