Corporate Shoot

[Steele Productions]

I had my first corporate shoot yesterday, I have produced videos for this client and done some design work for them, but this is my first paying still shoot. Here are 2 of the "fun" shots.

[McMadCow]

I think the first one is pretty effective. I would try to darken the background, though. It's already a very busy shot, and there is nothing added with the inclusion of all that extra furniture back there.
I probably would like the second shot more, but there doesn't seem to be a clear point of focus to train my attention. I want to look at the hand, but it's out of focus. The part that is in focus closer to the viewer doesn't really show me anything.
Thanks for posting!

[1ºC]

i agree with McMadcow

very good pics